I.               Intro

A.     When the government has abandoned you, where do you have left to go?

B.     Slums are wastelands where people are forced to live in poverty.

C.     Slums are areas where people are forced to live in poor sanitation, diseases are easy to come by and show what the rest of the world could potentially be.

II.             Defendable Point 1

A.     When people are left in poor sanitation, the cost of lives is tremendous.

B.     Slums are basically wastelands. Having garbage as the ground itself is simply a norm.

i. (Quote)

ii. (Paraphrase)

C.     Explanation

D.    This poor sanitation can lead to deadly diseases.

III.           Defendable Point 2

A.     Diseases are easy to come by in slums.

B.     Children die often in slums due to their weak / young immune systems.

i.                (Quote)

ii.              (Paraphrase)

C.     Explanation

D.    Poor sanitation and diseases are common in slums. But to have the rest of the world be potentially just that, is unacceptable.

IV.            Defendable Point 3

A.     Slums show what the world can potentially be if the population keeps increasing at an alarming rate.

B.     Supporting Evidence

i.                (Quote)

ii.              (Paraphrase)

C.     Explanation

D.    These factors are what create a Slum. They do not have any positive effect on anyone.

V.              Conclusion

A.     When the government abandons a group of people within their country, Slums are created.

B.     Slums are areas where people are forced to live in poor sanitation, diseases are easy to come by and show what the rest of the world could potentially be.

C.      (Summarize Arguments)

D.    If humanity did not have proper leadership, then wouldn’t the world just be one giant slum?